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Lies; True Yet. 

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Posted 15 January 2015 - 12:48 PM

Lies; true yet. 

Who how where,
then what and why,
Does this mind 
tell utter lies?
How these things 
do come to fly
Yet no common 
cause to glide?

As if seems 
no answer lies,
passion keeps 
on driving high
Through the blues 
of empty skies
To pamper moods 
on greater sigh.

A'all these real 
or simply words, 
The trail of joys 
in lower worlds?
Or are these made 
of higher gods,
The crazy ones 
of shrunken hearts?

Love. 

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Posted 15 January 2015 - 01:13 PM

As if seems 
no answer lies,
passion keeps 
on driving high
Through the blues 
of empty skies
To pamper moods 
on greater sigh.

 

>> Such a state of mind later ends up in a sigh... no doubt... but those few moments of ecstasy can be cherished forever...

 

That is he charm of love...

 

Nice to see you back and active Abso :)

Enjoyed your poem  :good:




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Posted 15 January 2015 - 03:46 PM

As if seems 
no answer lies,
passion keeps 
on driving high
Through the blues 
of empty skies
To pamper moods 
on greater sigh.
 
>> Such a state of mind later ends up in a sigh... no doubt... but those few moments of ecstasy can be cherished forever...
 
That is he charm of love...
 
Nice to see you back and active Abso :)
Enjoyed your poem  :good:




Great comment Ranjini. I really loved it.
It left no confusion between the author and the reader.

its nice and fine
when someone says
The moment found
its words on Place,
For similar beats 
to mind its taste.
Yes ! this moment
Is to sigh. (again)!

Hope you keep well. Love :)

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Posted 16 January 2015 - 08:57 AM

Great comment Ranjini. I really loved it.
It left no confusion between the author and the reader.

its nice and fine
when someone says
The moment found
its words on Place,
For similar beats 
to mind its taste.
Yes ! this moment
Is to sigh. (again)!

Hope you keep well. Love :)

 

Abso...Thanks for the nice lines as reply :)

 

Yes, I'm doing fine  :)

 

Yes ! this moment
Is to sigh. (again)! >>
Why sigh...? :mmm:




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Posted 16 January 2015 - 10:15 AM


Why sigh?
Because sky is so high!


 
>> Such a state of mind later ends up in a sigh... no doubt... but those few moments of ecstasy can be cherished forever...
 
That is he charm of love...
 


Love :)

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Posted 16 January 2015 - 10:53 AM

Why sigh?
Because sky is so high!



Love :)

 

Who is your sky... ? ;;)




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Posted 16 January 2015 - 02:20 PM

Who is your sky... ? ;;)


You! :)

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Posted 16 January 2015 - 05:40 PM

atheyo... :blush: 




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Posted 16 January 2015 - 08:47 PM

:amme: engrish :odikko:

 

absuu :good:

 

Who how where,
then what and why,
Does this mind 
tell utter lies?

 

chilappo parayarund :athe:




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Posted 22 January 2015 - 04:43 PM

ho.. ippozha vayichathu... lavan sherikkum oru puliyaanu...




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Posted 22 January 2015 - 04:44 PM

Who is your sky... ? ;;)

 

 

 

You! :)

 

ithu sathyamaa... aaakshathe poleyaanu vimmy.. angethi cheraan paaadaaa




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Posted 27 January 2015 - 01:31 AM

gud 1 :super: !







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